Hey sweetie, I loved you poem! It's really nice! Guys suck, they always break our hearts, but we always forgive them and love them anyway, I guess it's how things go! One more thing you probably know it but always nice to remind it: "No one deserves your tears, the one that does will never make you cry!!"
take care
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Hey babe damn if this is about Brad then yeah im so sorry i wish i saw past his act earlier!!! I wrote one about him 2 hes an ass...my only hope is that he treats this new one better...cuz no one deserves everything he put us through....if this isnt about Brad...then WTF!!!??? LOL LOVE YA

The line- Because some things you don't say,
I just knew. It doesnt fit it should either be you didnt say i just knew or you dont say i just know.

When just her and my little brothers where there should be were there instead.

Ok now the good part the poem was really good and I am sooo there with ya. Last semester my ex kept making out with me after he broke up and yet kept saying he didnt want me or any of that. It just got my hopes up and just kept making things worse. Its tough but it gets better. Good job with your porm I liked it a lot.

Thats poem not prom lol sorry about that

Great poem i love it your excellent!!!

love always
tabby

Great job, I liked the flow!
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I don't usually like love poems but this one was awsome. Keep up the good work. You are a very talented poet. *5/5*

Aww really sad but beautifully written. I loved how you know the things no other girl would probably know about him.

This is a poem that a lot of ppl can relate to. thats what i like in it. i guess ppl learn by their mistakes, so there is truth in it too.. good job mate
rob

100% perfect, i loved every line, it was so sad, so sweet, so emotional and i can relate to it well. keep writing, you have so much talent
love Tara-Kay

Nice poetry. This flowed really well, the only small hitch is the second to last stanza, where you repeat 'that', it ruins the flow a little. Apart from this, awesome poem, I really liked the rhymes and the flow. Overall great work.

Peace. [Sole]