Wow. Loved this poem! Wonderful ending with "kissing the rain"very wonderful, and I could actually see you standing there feeling miserable and kissing the rain.

Another powerful part was " I wish there was another life I could borrow" Very powerful.... Actually.. now that I come to think about it, I love every part of it. I think I should read it over again haha.

WEll done sweety, also thank you for you comment, you should know it means a lot to me!

Lotsaaa love -xxx-
Keep up the good work!

I loved the last stanza, specially " Drops are now drenching me, So I'm kissing the rain"....
beautifully done... i felt all the pain in this poem... but hey, that's what love is all about... keep writing hun... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Hey mez!
jus thot id tl u dat u did a gr8 job on da poem kasam it was awsome n if it was ritn frm hw i felt den lyk u sed den wow cos it was so acur8...u shud b wel hapy wid it, i lve it!
tke cre
xmwahx

Wow, that was beautiful. I loved every word. Excellent job, 5/5

I loved the last stanza of this poem, it was sooo beautiful! 10/5 (if i could...)