Excellent job...nice flow and detail...Really good..no changes in this poem..i noticed your in North Carolina..So am i..thts kool...anyway thanx for your comment i greatly appreciated it..makes me feel good
Great job 5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

That was deep. i know how you feel. stay up w/ luv *bouncy*

Its all good with your typo... i know wat you meant...no need to say it..thanx for the comment though

Thank you a lot and all....but i gotta repay u somehow..you need to write some more poems..thts wat its gotta be..cause i cant just be commentin the same poems now

Omg this is amazing, i loved this one, its a very unique concept for a poem and it is very well written too, i lovedd it, great work , keep it up hun, take care