Really good. 5/5.

Great job. Very imaginitive way of expressing yourself.
As always~ Kate

Nice job, clearly written to the point. You can try adding more imagery

In all your poetry so far it seems like you not putting any great effort into it...and it feels as if you are just blurting out what ever you feel at the time and organizing it into stanzas...
work on your flow and ryhmn and you will definitly get much better!Good work though

~Retniapdoolb~