I love this poem, it has alot of...whats the word...emotion? in it. Its sad but I like it.

NOTE: I am not suicidal, okay just thought I'd let you know.

This is a really good poem! i enjoyed reading it!

Wow. i really like this one.... i write about suiside and cutting urself and stuff like that. So yeah, but i like this. its really good
Greta

That is really good very touching

Ow, that one really struck me deep. It reminded me of my friend, he commited suicide about a year and a half ago, and all I ask is why?

Hey... pretty intense poem. im glad ur not suicidal though..
dee

I ask myself the same questions every day and every night, great poem i love how it's so long but u make it so you don't want to stop reading!great job!5/5 keep up the great work
auna

I kinda no how u feel...great poem though 5/5
auna

This is so sad but very well written

Sad and meaningful your words describe it all 5/5 Steve

Wow this is another beautiful poem from you. The questions are very powerful and the repetition has a clear function. great 5/5 dear

The repetition effectively grew your turbulent message. You described well “suicide’s” finality, and without pervading the course of its reason, found within despondency the hopelessness of fatality.

I most enjoyed the fact that you introduced ‘regret’. In saying that, “Why Suicide?” was an original of its kind; compared to all the other poems about suicide.

Oh.. wow. The depth in this one..
Your writing is astonishing..
The whole meaning throughout..
Is just.. wow. Good work.
Overall Rating: 4.5/5

And this the only thing I see that can set me free?
`Maybe my grammar is turning on me, or my eyes are hallucinating, but I feel like there should be a "is" after the "this" and before the "the." *shrugs. I find that different places words differ ... so maybe I am wrong, but at the moment, it doesn't make complete sense.

Why must I think these things?
Why can't life just go back to the way it was,
before I thought these things?
`The repetition of "things" bothers me dearly, though I feel like you did that on purpose... I just can't figure out, what for?

So I slit my wrist and watch my body bleed.
All my thoughts have gone away.
I’m finally gonna be free.
`These words were like a whisper as I read them... They're sort of creepy; haunting, and they make me feel like ... I can understand the pain and why you (the person speaking in this poem) chose to want to die. It's ... scary beautiful.

Death has taken me I no longer feel a thing,
but then again death isn't what I thought it'd be.
`I love these lines! I can't explain why, but they just seem so clever to me, and they made me smile in such a sadly questioning piece.

I can no longer do anything,
no longer think,
no longer feel,
no longer love,
no longer be.
`Extremely effective. That last choice is brilliant, and emphasizes the wrong choice.

Overall, I liked it. The flow wasn't perfect, and all that technical crap makes this piece not as "amazing" when you're looking at that kind of stuff -- but the message and the way you put it through with the repetition of those same few lines continuously was extremely effective. Your words were potent, and though I felt like your ending could've been stronger -- it was ... haunting, and I don't think these questions will leave my mind for quite a while.

Well done .
..__MiNDYY

It well written... the repetition did amazing job... sad.. emotional and heartfelt...

keep writing...