Beautiful baby...
certain lines worry me...but hey thats me
love meee
xxxxxxxx

Beautiful...good job-xxx-

Hey i really love the symbolism that runs rampant throughout this poem. Its really great, and helps to make people understand the way you feel. Well Done, Nice poem!

Luv Andy xxx

Wonderful poem Kirsty. So sweet yet so sad. Beautiful written. Keep up the good work sweety, hope you are ok -xxx- Lotsaa love

Love the Imagery attached to this motif of a snake bite. Awesome Level of diction, but maybe if your break this into stanzas it'll just make this piece pop! keep it up I'm looking forward to more pieces from you=)

Jenn aka Disappearing=)

I love the whole idea dear!!
I love this poem so much,so powerful!!

Well done like always it was excellent!!!
Keep it up, you gots talent!

xxx

This is touching
i can relate to this
that lost love
thinking about it
love the title
great piecex.

Very good write. love is beautiful, but at times nothing hurts worse.