Comments : Lonley Echo

  • 15 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Wont rate becuase this wouldnt be fair.. i dont like this poem much, but if this is the type of poem you like to write and you think its good then dont change it but i would totally tweak it... the topic is a good one, just the form of the poem is what i would change... if you edit it let me know and ill read and rate it and comment again