Comments : What If?

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Very good Bill... We should all live like this, we tend to get too stuck in our ways and get stressed, fatigued and fed up. Live a little, we all deserve it :) Great write, livened up my day!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    I like this
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    What better time to live like you were dying tomorrow than today? Good point, amazing poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is wonderful, Bill! It sounds so easy coming from you! Very inspiring and it makes me want to go out and, have some fun! Love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    I agree Bill. Good words to live by.

    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bill,

    You are so right, we should all live by such a code.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    This was awesome. so true........
    i liked ur work dear

    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    I like the message it sends, but its not the best poem, no imagery or much depth.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Brie*

    Your poem reminded me of what my life should be!