WOW!! IT'S AMAZING!! Nice poem.

The only suggestion I have is to change this one line:

"As mysterious as a black rose"

And I suggest that for no other reason you already are saying "beautiful as a rose".

I truly enjoyed this poem, great job.
~Jaime

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Katey,
Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. I really enjoyed reading some of yours, this is one on my favorites. You should consider submitting it into a contest. Private message me and I will give you the contest website, the grand prize is money. Very nice poem, I loved it! Take care.
Luv,
Sarah

Wow, this poem gave me butterflies! It was so beautiful!