Comments : Small black kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by Newbie

    Its not really clearly depicted. but its supposed to be about a vampire =( not something to do with sex.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Well vampirism is very sexual and intimate so really it's quite similar to sex in a wierd way, great poem though, I really liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy

    This is such a sad poem!!! i am sooooo sorry if this actually happened.i hope it didnt though. this poem was really fun to read! you are an awesome writer, good job, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosechild

    This poems Is great. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Very descriptive! Good job I could picture everything like watching a movie almost

  • The Seducitve Darkness Of a Vampire Poem, I Liked The Title, It Was An Eye Cather, I Loved The Plot And The Ending *Kisses* Awesome 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo