HOT! Hot! HOT! Great poem my friend.

Simon! very hott! lol, I really loved it though. Excellent poem ^_^

Sha Bang ! Whoohooo !
Awesome write Simon ,
hot...hot...hot I must say ...
Wonderfully written ....Phew ,*wipes sweat off forhead*

:-) I'm loving this poem Simon. Great job, always take care and keep it up my friend. I love your poetry!

Awesome write....hot....hot....hot....and I loved it.

love Ann

The pace was right on the mark. I could hear the drums beating and intensifying as I read along. Hot!

Simon,

This really sizzles!

Best regards,

Steve

Wow this was sooo good, very sexy... loved it!!
5/5

Keep writtin cus wow u just blew me away... amazin

Gr8 job!!!!

::MELI::

That was relly good

Damn boy, that was sizzlen hot...VRY SEXIII.....I truly enjoyed it....