I think that is really really good it sounds like u have put alot of thought in that poem u shud b proud of it well done lol

*cries*

nooo.

it's sad. =(

BE HAPPY! i love you.

like super-de-duper lots. yeah.

*GIANT bear hug*

if you EVER need to talk, email me, call me, whatever you need to do. mmk?

aaaand, you need to submit more poems, mister. =P

-Brittnay

Errm. Thanks? O.O

I know very well who you are, dear. Tut tut. What did you do? xo

What did you do to get banned? Ehh? ..I thought you promised me you'd give me them. I'm heartbroken. -.- xo

I meant the polka dot pants. ;\ Idierrrrt. You confuse me, boy. xo

How could I confuse you? :|:|

wi9ra8ur! WHY WOULD I WANT THEM ANYWAY? And why wouldn't i be allowed them? GOSHSHHGOSH.x

So, you're saying, I'd want them and not be allowed them because Kristen has them? I know perfectly well how to get something off Kristen. ;x

Oh yes I certainly have my ways with her. Ahem. :]

*tear* This is sad =[ Im glad it's not totally true!

It was cool though, Me liked!!

luv natalie x-x

*dramatic music* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! don't die!!!!!!!! talk to somebody if you EVER EVER EVER feel this way EVER again!

Nice work! some really powerfull lines here!

Awww!! dont die think of all the people that love you and your poems (aka me i love your poems) there so good i like thi sone alot it can relate to me alot aswell xoxroxyxox

Wow this poem was so sad... and i feel the emotion this is great! actually sometime i think about that but i realize that life is beautiful and we have to enjoy it.. i really love this poem and i think it written very well and it comes to ur heart great job 5/5

god bless!

Omgosh I really thought this was sad mark!! read some of my poems, they might not be great great but they are ok. some of them are alot like this one.

Excellent poem 5/5 i can relate to this, it shows alot of emotion well done keep it up.