True Love Poem

by clare   Feb 5, 2006


It was a secret,
no one was aware,
how much i loved you,
how much i cared,

a few people found out,
only friends that were close,
that it was you,
that i loved the most,

they convinced me to spill,
and tell you i cared,
but when it came to it,
i was so scared,

i caved in and told you,
and i asked you out,
you said ud think about it,
but my mind was full of dought,

it took you a couple of days,
over the weekend,
to come up with a answer,
you told your friend,

you friend had to tell me,
he told me you said no,
but of corse (its all the same),
he wanted to be friends, though,

i was depressed,
i was upset,
it hadnt sunk in,
not just yet,

explaining it all,
though a e-mail,
i waited for a reply,
i felt so pale,

i told you i loved you,
i told you i cared,
i waited for that reply,
to open the message i dared,

i read it slowly,
accedetally skipping ahead,
i couldnt belive what was written,
this is what it said,

\"i think iv made a mistake,
i think i feel a diferent way,
ill think about it again,
and tell you on monday\",

i waited for that day,
he told me to meet him after school,
the day took forever,
but the time came. it was cool,

i was so nervouse,
i was so scared,
he told me he wanted to go out with me,
but tell no one i dared,

i didnt tell a soul,
my tounge felt bitten,
i got another e-mail,
this was what was written,

\"i love you forever,
you can tell people about us,
because i love you,
i love you so much\"

this is a true story! no joke! and
me and ma boi r still goin out :D
Plz leav a coment and ill leav a coment on your poems:D
oh sorry we rnt goin out he broke up wif me :(:(

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    OMFG
    THIS WAS THE POEM THAT RELATES TO ME TOTALLY

    I LIKED THIS GIRL

    SHE DIDNT

    THEN I CUDNT TALK TO HER

    SO I SPOKE BY EMAIL...

    but luckily yu had a happy ending to it all...

    i didnt...

    still dont hav the guts to talk to her...

    and we are only barely frnds...because first she ignored me...

    i only want to ask u to do one thing...please read my poem YOUR EMAIL...

    i think you have gone thru the SAME THING as i have...waiting for an email...

    and maybe u can understand wat im trying to say...

    thank u so much...

    thank you for giving this masterpiece

  • 18 years ago

    by fallenfireangel

    The poem was great. Maybe those ppl in the world who think true love can never be will read that poem and realize maybe the one that your in love with is also in love with you but are just to afraid to say anything.

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::José.e||

    Aw! all i have to say is that your poem was the sweetes thing cause it actually happend and you and your guy are still together, thats so awseom! keep up the good writting!

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