Good job man that was great, I know I'd go to hell and bad for the woman I love... even if it is a bit onesided I don't care!

Wow i love this it is so goooood!!! you are such an excellent writer!
keep it up

love always
tabby

Hewwo Jell-o.
I love [l.o.v.e] your word usage, it just makes me wonna read more!
This i an excellent poem! Put together very well!!
Well done! keep it up=]

-x

OK.

This poem is awesome.

But I don't know if you were trying to rhyme,
because if you were, I'm sorry, I'm just telling the truth, it was weak rhymes. Anyways, I really like this poem.

And I read it so many times, i wish it could be longer.

Keep up the good work.

Once, he has her in his eyes, he'd make obeisance
Having conquered with fortitude, the maze of her remembrance
(Favorite part)

Good poem, very nice form of expression.. 5/5

That is beautiful. I wouldn't change anything about it! 5/5

That was really great. i loved it. nice job. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

That was really great. i loved it. nice job. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

That was really great. i loved it. nice job. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

Very nice, once again it felt some what choppy, so just work on that. Good Job!

One word. WOW

It is wonderful keep it up you are talented

Wow..that was an amazing poem. i loved it. keep it up. 5/5

thanks for sharing
take care
shannon

Now this my dear, is the writing of a poet, by heart. Excellent job and profine use of Imagery...

Hina

Beautifully written. you seem to have talent. well done yet again

'Having conquered with fortitude, the maze of her remembrance'

you've become one of my favorite poets on this site..the entire poem i wanted to see how it ended but I didnt want to miss anything else..

I hate you... you write so much better than me...lol, great write. Total hotness. 5/5

Such power in this write. You have true talent and really comes out here. Wow this was one heck of a poem

Sondos

Awesome poem!! ^^