Pretty strong poem, man...that was a good! Well done my friend... always take care and thanks for sharing. 5/5

Wow, excellent write! I definately feel the anger to this one, powerfully said!

Wonderful writing Steve as always! A deep, sad and emotional write. Superb poem... :)

Infatuation with your own needs,
that's a beautiful way to describe self centredness.

hope you are ok, Steve.
take care
shobhana

Hi, I'm new :-). I just wanted to say that I like your poems, you pour so much emotion into them. I know how you feel, but the feeling's unexplainable sometimes. You're a very wonderful :-).

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That was an amazing poem... Keep up the good work
-Emily