Comments : Help!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    This is really good!!!!

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hunni, I can't say this enough to you, I love you and I am always here for you no matter what.

    Be my friend and tell me I will be alright,
    when I'm crying comfort me and hold on tight,
    When I'm scared tell me you'll always be there,
    say you love me and tell me that you care,

    So I hope that I am this to you, I am the firned who tells you that I am here for you, I will comfort you and I wil ALWAYS care for you, we are in this together right =0)

    Love and hugs from me to you

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl l0t 0f heartfelt w0rds in this piece. very sad n deep.

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Katt

    Wow! That was such a good poem. That's is good message for all friends and I love how you made it rhyme every line but it doesn't sound cheesy.
    -Katt

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    That was a great poem im sure u hav lots of friends lots of people to comfort u xoxo be happy 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    I'm always here sweetie....a sad write...that touched my heart.
    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written, the rhyming is very unforced and it flows well. the feelings are very dtrong in this and clearly expressed.
    5/5