by Macy
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Wwo i seriously hope this isn't about you. but anyways this is an outstanding poem! |
by Ruthie
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Hey there beautiful! sad but true. as always I adore your rhyming and your wording and your rhythem. gorgeous darlin! and don't worry about not commenting lol... I'm in my last year of high school... I havn't been on here in over a week lol... *hugs* catch u l8er |
by Katie
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Wow what an amazing display of words. God bless you |
by loosk
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This is a rly rly good poem keep up the good work XxXlucyXxX |
by Emily
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That was an amazing poem about another problem people have, I loved it... Keep up the amazing work |
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Been there, and it sucks. I got so into it, that just looking at food made me sick, leterally sick. Anerexia brings you nothin but pain, endless pain, and is a sick addiction like so many in this world. It is really pathedic that so many people feel they have to fit into teh mold, not pathedic to them, but to our society that is so screwed that way. Good poem, hope you are not going through this yourself, and if you are, I hope you can find a way out! If you need help, you can talk/contact me. 5/5 |
by Chelsi
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Great job! Very sad, but also very true. It happens everyday. Keep writing!! 5/5 |
by Bridgette
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WOW!! this is a GREAT poem. you worded it extremely well. and you captured the emotions so well. great job!! 5/5 |
by cLumsy
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Holy shizzle... you're damn straight. so many people are unsatisfied with their bodies. sigh. a women's ideal is so sad.... i hope everyone learned from this. this poem is the beacon of truth!!!!!!! 5/5 |
by all4you
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Once again a great poem!! |
by DeepSoul
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You read my mind! i love it! this is awesome! This stage is hard, cuz no one likes how they look! this poem is really good hun! good job! much love~Kim |
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Great poem... |
by Paige
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O.M.G this poem is amazing it soo reminds me of a film i watch called perfect body she was a gymnast and she didnt eat i love thispoem soo much it is Great |
by Atomic
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*Insert a cool comment* |
by Amber
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Your realy talented.. wow your deffinetly one of the best poets ive come across on here!! |
by Razorblade
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Great poem. I hope your not writing in third person. 5/5 |
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Wow so ad but true and the way you wrote it was soooo good i wish i was as good as you lol and thankyou soooooooo much for commenting on my poem it means alot!! 5/5 |
by Jo
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Wow, that's a really GREAT poem! i LUVed it!! ..if u wanna talk..i'm here! n thx for the comment, but it's scrate..cuz HE's the one missin' out...but n-e-wayz, i hope u take care! :) |
by FireCracker
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OH MY GOSH! This poem was amazing and it totally touched me! I gave it a five even tho it deserves much more. GR8 WORK! |
by Bertha
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Amazing... |