A love that could never be

With her tears the world would end. and no one would know her shame . but she had no one to blame . she lied and tried to be someone else. and never looked back to what she had before.
he was but a breeze in the wind with beautiful brown hair and eyes that could steal a soul with one look. but he would never try for he had a heart of gold and a soul for never breaking.
and with 1 hello they would be together forever or so they thought ...... b/c fate was working against them and parents from both sides would never agree. for what they wanted was happily ever after . but what they got was happily never never.
so she left without a note or even a goodbye , and with fear in her eyes she walked away and cryed. but when he found she was gone. he set aside his worries and went to search for his true love.when he finally found her all that was left was a dozen gold roses and a grave marker that read: for happiness never came for a heart that was always broken .she will lay under this tree with a rose as her token a token for happiness.
he collapsed to his knees and let out a huge cry. but when his greving was over all that was left was him and a very badly broken heart. so he pulled out his hidden secret, that could end all his pain forever........ he checked the dark ,deep holes and dropped all but one to the ground.
and with that one he would say goodbye forever...... but without thinking he looked down at the grave and said\" i will be always be faithfull , always loyal,i love you babe and that will never change.\" before he pulled that trigger he looked back once more not to find a grave but tofind that his beautiful bride was standing behind him with a worried look of pain and dispare....... but when both of their eyes met and tears filled up.........not even a poet could put in word what they felt............ for she had been searching for him as well...........

ok this is a very long poem that i wrote hey leave me some comments and tell me what you think
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