Comments : Josh (my lil bro)

  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Great poem, its really sweet. A little error is the "you" in the last line should be "your". I like the idea behind this poem, its a great idea to share with anyone and its better than any material object because it shows them how much you care. Great piece and keep writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wonderful poem..great work here!