Thats really cool, that you would write something like that for your brother. I loved th flow of this poem. nothing needs to be changed. Its perfect just the way it is. You are a splendid writer, when i have more time I will have to read more of your work.

5/5, West

Good poem, that's sweet, kinda the same with my big sis (except we are rude but jokingly) :D

Beautifully written...i love it.