Comments : Trent (my big bro)

  • 15 years ago

    by Patrick

    Thats really cool, that you would write something like that for your brother. I loved th flow of this poem. nothing needs to be changed. Its perfect just the way it is. You are a splendid writer, when i have more time I will have to read more of your work.

    5/5, West

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Good poem, that's sweet, kinda the same with my big sis (except we are rude but jokingly) :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    Beautifully written...i love it.