Comments : My Special Friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Another beautiful poem. Well structured, and rhyme and rhythm, together at last:)(I still struggle at times) Your poems are a joy to read. Strangely enough, one of my closest friends is named Ame. A couple of my poems were written for her... I pray she never finds out ;)
    Love and Light,
    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by foxy cleopatra

    That was a really lovely poem, and its really nice to see someone being happy and valuing the friendships they have!!

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww cute lol...n yeh wel stucterd..keep it up gr8 work though...luv dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by tastefull

    Thats great i am speachless 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex xxx

    Wow this is really good work. i loved it all. it shows how special a friendship is and how you always need them fantastic 5/5 x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Colton

    Beautiful Poem :D, i loved it so much, You definitly have to keep writing because you clearly have amazing Talent :), Please keep writing :)

    God bless

    Colt

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    Absolutly fab keep it up girl

  • 18 years ago

    by emmaroo

    Hello wow your poems are great and im not just sayin that mine either drag on or to short but yours i just wanna carry on reading no matter the lenghth well done
    xxxxxx
    lv emz
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by tastefull

    Hehe this poems reminds me of me lol jk fab poems hun keep up all ur hard work ur excellent!!!! luv shakira x

  • 18 years ago

    by Farrah Kelly

    I liked this poem, it is clear what Amy has done for you, god bless er lol. lv faarah xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Teys

    You made the big man teys shed a tear Sam!

    the flow of your stanzas is like water running off a waterfall - done with utter ease, simplicity yet beauty.

    i am a s*cker for rhyme but on that not am a tight a** when it comes to rhyme i think is forced; i loved this poem and its rhyme did not seem pushed or shoved or dictating where the poem was heading.

    the only problem i had with reading it was the 5th stanza. but im sure this was my crappy reading/inturpretation skills at work there :P

    \"The passion for what she does and loves
    It fits her personality like a glove\"
    dont really kno why, but i adore these lines

    all in all a sweet, heart-felt poem that ANY friend, foe, relative or random would appreciate.

    :)
    teys

  • 18 years ago

    by confuzed angel

    What a touching poem nuffin is wrong with this keep it up!!!! got my full marks 5/5!!! lots of love xxxxxxx thank u for all the advise jade xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Aww thats saw sweet. great poem. loved it