Wow, where to start. That was a beautiful expression of emotion. I liked the way you tie all your thoughts together.

I can actually identify with the past about being sorry about past events. you just need to know that if this is the way you feel talking helps a lot. Just be strong.

5/5, west

Wow, this is really good

Once I'm gone, you'll forget me so fast,
Just please, don't bring up the past.
^
brilliant lines. and brilliant poem!!
great job!
love jess XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxX

Your poem was wonderfully, so much Imagery was used!! so much emotion! I really liked it!

Sad. again.

=(

i don't like you being sad. no, i don't.

you *points to you* deserve to be happy. so i *points to self* will make sure that happens. lol..

love, love, love you.

i'm going to email you after i make this friend space thing for Glen-Duh on myspace. it's too complicated for her comprehension. =P

Fantastic poem def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care sarah x

Aww, lol I just realised I've said "aww" at the start of every comment haha.
lol... but yeah.. This is good too, But I think you should go deeper, Cause in it you say how your sorry for what you put them through, But maybe try to expand it a bit. Explain what your so sorry for, And what did you put them through. Digg in really deep! lol Hope that helped =] 5/5

luv me x-x

Lots of pain and anguish... good work!