Comments : Rambaling

  • 18 years ago

    by YoU-nEvEr-NeW

    It was good i liked it =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It's a good poem. Advice: Try and convey the meaning of the poem a little more clearly. I get the whole dilemma thing, but what is the dilemma really about? The title says it. So should the poem. Of course this is just my opinion, and I'm not trying to be harsh. You have the makings of a good writer, and it is a good poem.