"all the he cares but his scared,
his confused,
and he just wants to hide."
the his stuff doesnt make much sense,
but i like it it has a great point, true feelings, it's a plea no one can rate but i give it a five. dont think about it that way, the hardest part of living is letting go. see what your suppose to let go of and do it, no hesitations, look forward not around or in the past. its hard to see all that, i no im going through it, but it'll all be cool. be strong in yourself. great poem.
lin

*hugs* dont ever worry about how people lie. people can be mean sometimes... everyone... but they have good points too. and yes, heartbreak hurts. but you're beautiful; too beautiful to waste your time on something that is gone.remember that birdy thing.... let em go, if they come back theyre urs forever? never feel bad. just be nice 2 ppl and theyll kno who u r. theres lots of people you think are perfect, but no one was perfect except for Jesus. it said so in the bible. love is something beautiful and you certainly deserve it. dont get down on urself, for u r nice and great just the way u r!

Read this poem and you'll understand why I wish I could write as good as you!!! Very sad and depressing, I really liked the line "i can't go on knowing that nothing i do is enough." because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and it makes me think maybe i'm not doing enough...

Holy shit thanks for the comment ii lvoe ur poem i havent been on so i didnt right anyof my new one but like keep cheeking on my site for my pomes
l voes
karina
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Great poem, love it!! ^-^

I can relate to this well done xXxXxXxX

If this poem is True...I'm Truly Sorry and i hope you can pull through...
and those two lines..My love was Forever...While the love she had for me Grew pale the next day..lol is that better for you....

and for you still thinkin we should be together i dont know..she's obsessed with that mike dude hes who she wants i dont really care anymore...

That's so good! yeah i definately know how you feel...

Wow, good pem. 5/5

Absolutly breathtaking. exactly how i feel, exept i like a girl and she likes my best friend.But stupendous job. I didn't take offence but thx for your comments.I'm 15 .Lov Brandon

This poem is so brilliant its a great poem keep up the gd work hunni x

I danm love dis poem i tink its d wake up call i need!! i cant go on!