I like this one even more. amaaaaaaaazing

Wow this was really good! I hope things get better for you! Kepp it up!

Wow.. i LOVED this.. it was soo good, the rhyme scheme was perfect and so were all your descriptions and the emotion you put in! excellent write! 5/5

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!