by Isabella Feb 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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U said u loved me but now u don't. What happened to I love u most?U said u'd stay and be with me but now Ur gone and not with me u found someone new. Who YOU say is the most true yet you call me a word which hurts me yet I cant stop thinking of u. U said u care and wont let any harm come to me but now look at what u did to me. I gave u my heart and my soul but all those things u said were lies and just something to catch a girl. Bcuz u said. |
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Good job! My only suggestion is to put some returns in there so that it's easier to read, but the message was clear. Keep writing, check out my poems sometime! =) |
by Isabella
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Ur awesum! |