Hey sweeti
i just gotta sat woah thats amazing that basically brang a tear to my eye and that takes alot its so full of emotion ifeel sorry for the guy and girl just WOAH thats so good if i could i would give it 6/5 but i can only go as high as 5/5
take care keep up the amaing work i will be waiting for some more poems
luv paul xxx

Damn! That reminds me of me when my boyfriend and I had problems I wanted to do that so bad I've triend so many times and I called him and said GOOD-BYE and HAVE A GREAT LIFE I told him I was gonna do that and he started crying and so on; he stoped me by saying that he loves so much! I'm still going out with him! GOOD poem!!!!!! 5/5! Check my poems out whever you have time!

I love it good job the thing is its so true its real

Wow good job, things like that really happen and it's sad. Good poem, I really felt it. very emotional.

Thanks for your comment btw. xxx

This is on some ol' crazy shit iz this some thin' u exxpereniced or jus a story to edgeucate tha people

This was sad but goOd. BuT you already know you good at writing. i like your style still stay up. _krisanta_

Thanks for the comment

i really like this one
great job

Yea i really like this poem i dont know why but it really touched me

Hey now that was really good!
but it made me super sad!
wow i couldnt imagine that for real!
i mena when i was reading it i was picturing it but in real life wow!
thats all i can say!
but good work

Wonderful poem...sad but it's a reality; people committ suicide a lot & it's truly sad...It's an amazing poem...I like how you used silence on the phone as a symbol of his life...Def. 5/5!
-Amanda

Yo sometin like dis happen befoe to 1 of my homeboys. 3 of my homies got murdered and he put a rope round his nek b/c of it. It waz sad but stupid. Dere waz no reason he shouldve done dat. NE way u write poemz I can relate 2. I like dat. Keep up da good work.

Stay Playa,
SC

Damn thats hella sad girl why you write somethin like that? well holla lata aiight peace

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Great job. That was a really great poem even though it was quite sad also. I understand it cuz at my school we had like 4 suicides during my time there and those were some of the people you would never expect to do something like that becuz they seemed jus fine. Well keep doin what you do

You're poems are awesome! you're a fantastic writer.. good job 5/5
-sarah-