Good, well written from the heart. Keep it up!

OH WOW! I really liked this right..that last line ended your poem perfectly! Britt and I want to thank you for reading our poem and only wanted to return the favor by reading yours! Thanks again and nice write!

Some lines have too many syllables (I can tell because I do it too) but other than that I love it. I think a lot of people have traveled this road. Excellent write!