Good breakup poem

This is a wonderful break up poem and I love it, you did a really nice job on it. I hope things are well with you.To be honest I have been going through something like this right now with my ex-girlfriend.

Keep up the good work!

-Josiah

The last part was crazy good. i wrote something similar to my boyfriend, but before i got the chance to give it to him, he broke up with me. what i dont understand is...i was going to breakup with him, i was ready. but when it happened, i swear i felt my heart explode. but i love this poem soooo much. like all of your poems, its fantastic. 5/5
lauren