Thats realy sad.... wow thats amazing...
read mine sum time plz id like ur opinion

Hey,
in second stanze should you be your??
same in last stanza??
Ok other then that Awsome poem, full of emotion. sORRY FOR YOUR LOSS YOU CAN TELL SHE MENT SOMETHING TO YOU!!!
~~Sweetei

Wow! Simply beautiful! This poem was so deep and powerful that it almost made me tear up. It was so sad yet so wonderfully done. Your flow and rythm were great! It had great consistancy and none of the stanza's seemed forced. My fav lines were:

"A baby that was due
In a week or maybe less
Never had the chance to grow
And was peacefully put to rest"

I read that and i was awed. Thats so sad. I know a friend who lost her baby as well just two weeks before the due date. Luckily she survided, but it was heartbreaking that the baby did not.

You have a talent for expression your feelings and creating a image inside a readers head. Very well done. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5 =D
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

I love this poem altough its truly sad, and alot more so for me as i just found out that i am pregnant. keep up the good work and i am sorry for you loss.

Sad i like it alot though great job

tabby

Fantastically written, great flow and the rhyming seems very natural.

5/5

Wow very touching poem. very understandable too. im sorry about your losses. if you get achance please reaed some of mine andlemmeknow

Wow this is really good. please keep writing, you have a god sent gift

Great poem keep it up

Touching poem, really don't know what else to say except yu might want to read over and fix those minor spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it's sad and hooks the reader and doesn't let go until the equally sad ending.