I luff this poem to like i luff most of your others to it says alot

Very good poem, so touching and emotion. I understand the pain that is written within this poem, You can see by just reading my poems, But way way keep up the good work and be strong.

-Josiah

Aww this is so sweet!I love it so much,it sounds like a situation I am in now....I love my camp mom,I wish I could be with her 4-ever....Good job.

Very well written and expressed.

is the line "then one day something changed someone heard her scream" ment to be 2 lines though, as in:
"then one day something changed
someone heard her scream"

I got to say I love sytle as a poet and you are very good. This poem was powerful and meaningful and sweet all at the same time. I would like to add you to my favorite if that's cool [I always ask the writer before I actually add as a courtesy]