Sounds a little like me not too long ago..
It's hard to quit, so just try to get him to and he might.

Thnk you so much..for commentin on my poems..i lik you poem too..so yeah..i brok my finger.s.o i cant type well..but thank you very much..

nick

Thank you again, for commeting on my poems.. I used to have this site, but then I had to get anew one.so all my old stuff is gone.. but on my other site..so these poems are kinda new..i can type alittle today whohoo..bcz i took off my spilt..so yeah very good poem keep it up..

nick

Yes I spend all my time on the computer..when i have time..which i do..sometimes..so yeah..bcz i dont have a compter at home...and i keep all my comments..i like comments lol

so yeah peace

I love this poem! Keep up the good work hun

Hey its me nick.. *thatemokid*

I changed my name..any ways whats up..ttyl hopeffuly..

nick

Really fricken good.... nicely put

I like this poem..Reminded me of my brother...Which my brother passed on..He got shot....Because of the path he dicided to choose..If this is true..Alll i can say is be there for him adn try to make him decide that its the wrong path..Let him make his mind up...But help him choose

I wish she felt the same way..as i feel about her

Exellent poem, I like the ryming! It is sad that your friend turned out that way. I hope you can help him turn his life around or he gets help.

I liked the subject and i was particularly taken with the title. my favorite part though has to be the last two lines. they were powerful, intelligent and brilliant. well done and keep it up won't you?

Brad

P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem 'Bird Sh*t', as all comments are appreciated.

P.P.S. no, sadly the story wasn't true. sorry

Aww This Poem Is Really sweet.. And The Flow And Rhymes Are Really Well Done.
;)
Keep It Up.

Hey! awesome poems!!
keep it up hun!
thanks for the comment!!
take care
kat

I lyked dis..awsum work..love dia mwaz xoxo...keep it up

What should my new name be??