This is so sad, but beautifully written! I could feel the longing in your words!

"my own reflection doesn't look my way" I love these words! Great job!

'the day is not that far dear
when you will write all this with tears
though by then i'll be as far as i could be
and no-one will be there to feel, what you now feel for me'

Yeah, I absolutely feel this one. Magnificent poem once again. I wonder where what made you write such a deep poem like this back in time. I sat here and read it several times and rewinded the past couple of weeks to find a way to connect this poem with you. But I couldnt. So now I'm asking you.... where did this poem come from?

Absolutely loved it as usual. I'm glad you decided to share it. It took my breath away. I have to say it once more, its magnificent!!!

Love
Michelle

That was beautiful... I love the self realization behind it... deep and heart felt... you should write more like this... simply wonderful... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

I loved it your a great writer please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5
love jayma!!!!

A lot of feeling behind the words but there's some flow problems. The ending was the better written part. Fine write and very emotional sounding.
~Unforgiven

A beautiful, truely inspiring poem. the effect and atmosphere it createss are perfect! a sensational write! thankyou! xXx

Nitin
I love the way you can write about so many things. You have a amazing talent. Excellent write.

did i shattered your dreams?
did i scared you with my screams?
all this time such a fool i have been
i wonder how i could i be so mean?

This stanza brought on the tears.
Love Cindy