"and every time I go to sleep there they lie,
underneath my blankets and sheets."

^^what a haunting and chilling write! I'm so glad its morning time.

What a powerful poem....our personal demons are with us, beneath the sheets each night....sometimes haunting us, sometimes just letting us know they are still around....well done!

Hey this was really good... very mystirious

Wow... i must say thats just amazing. i love your originality and ability to think like we all did when we were kids.

Eerie yet effective. I completely understand this, strange as that may be.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Can completely relate to this, I enjoyed your words and the imagery you conveyed, nice job.