I wish i could vote on this poem more than once... its really really beautiful... :o( i guess a lot of people feel like this... including me.. but i could never write it down as well as this... well done xx

Its reali amazing, so powerful, yet beautiful to read. I find i can reali relate to this poem, i can see my own reflection in your words. You're a reali amazing writer, keep it up...xx

Wow...i hate that you're feeling like this babe.
it's amazing hoyou've portrayed that image..it's simple devastating.
I wish a few words could help you realise that there is beauty in life, and that you should be kind to urself,, and ur beautiful, caring heart of yours.
I miss you so much huni..
please know that im always here for you..ill help you through and wont let go of you..
love always xoxo

Looooooove it. 5/5 and your on my favs. think you for commenting on mine. it really means alot to me. your poems are good. and if you ever need some one to talk to...about nething you can email me.

krystie

"sickly evidence..." Good line. I enjoyed it over all. Seperate it into stanzas, and you'll make a world of a difference to both the reader, and the poem.

Hina

WOW!! I really got caught into reading this poem of yours. Great work, just keep strong though you are a great writer and for that you will succed in life I bet. Keep it up

~Juls~

It is a very amazing poem.. It makes me think of people a lot... People I know. People that have been in pain. Or myself. Although, I've never went through the eating thing.

*shivers*

I can't say much. It's just... There... And great.

-Tony

This is such a beautiful poem, I really love it! Written with a lot of feeling, and the flow is excellent. Great work, and thanks for the help in the forum

Polly :-)

Strong, powerful and very beautiful

Sondos

This is similar to my poem reflection, i like it, the url of my poems is http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=176483 that takes you to my id page, sorry havewnt been able to get online to post the url sooner x

Wow, That was deep. Extremely good though. I honestly loved it! I can almost relate to it in some what way. I'm just lost for words. There's not one thing I would change. It's perfect the way it is! Keep it up =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Wow that was comletely amazing