Okay, first, be strong.
second, i liked it. good rhythm
i doubt i spelled that right
o well

again, be strong. you'll pull thru.

ashes eternal

I liked it.. it was worded really well..

2 years ago one of my close friends' younger brother committed suicide.. he did it the night before the school term started.. he was only 13.. he didnt leave a note or anything for anyone to actually understand why he did it.. the only thing we kno is that he really didnt want to go back to school..
RIP ben..

**No matter how bad you think things are.. youll always have the people you love and who love you.. just remember if you ever do really consider committing suicide.. you leave everyone whos ever loved you behind and they go through the worst pain of all** its never the answer..

Its a great poem... Different.. i like it...
Dont lose yourself to you.
5/5
- Sleeping Beauty.

That was so sad, yet so good.

thank uuuu for commenting my poems, means alot to me when people comemnt them, even though not many people do lol

i love ur poems just thought i'd letcha know. your really talented!

Thats a great poem be strong an never give up gud poem xoxo
5/5

Very good poem...i feel the same way can't get up the courage though...great job...keep it up :)

Awsome loved it.....

Omg!!! i love this!!
keep up the great work hope you will check mine out even though they is pretty bad.. lol
Ris

AWWWW!!! I love this poem...it's so real. You are really good...so anyway, how are you? I hope you're doing really great! Do you still cut? I hope not but let me know.....kk? Well, any questions JUST ASK I would LOVE to let you know!!! Well BYE!!!

Wow, im in love with this poem. i dont think any other poem has hit me like this one....amazing