That had me visualizong my own experinece you are talented keep up the good work. maybe u could read some of my poems.

Nicely done!!!

Omg ur freaky but the poem wusz good

Very, very hott.

Damn lil lady, do ur poems just keep getting better? Well i check up on ur poems weekly, & u haven't disappointed me yet.

Damn damn damn damn damn. hot baby!!! hell yeah.

The poem was very nice it was crazy

Damn that wuz hott!!!

WOWW!!! Very good....I was arroused...lolz well girl what can I say that you already haven't heard...But You are a good writer. Keep up the good work. Maybe you should read some of my poems. Just a suggesting.

WOW that was hott. UR a good riter

With writing like that, who needs porn? lol j/k very graphic, desriptive, and HOT!!

Wow..this poem was hot and a little freaky. Really Good.