That was a gud one, i hope u be on top again soon. hugs and kisses

VERY GOOD POEM. GREAT JOB

I really love this one!

Aww that was sooo good i loved it nice job!!

thanks for sharing
take care

Hey hny!
wow its gr8 kasam n u mde me sound lyk sm1 els lolz bt hey i dnt mind bein an agel lol nali seriously its a gr8 poem tnx n u no wt yr a gr8 m8 n im hu i am cos of u i wdnt b ere 2day if u hdnt been der fr me al da tyms iv needed sm1 i lve u loads
xmwahx

Once again another wonderful poem! You flow and rhythm were really well done! You used really good vocabulary and nothin seemed forced. I really liked the lines:

"You know when Im feeling low
And you always make me smile
Its you my lil angel, get my flow
Even in innocence youve got style"

It was so deep and meanignful. Well said.

The only thing that i found you could fix is, you forgot appostrifies. Such as the words you're...your put youre, just add the appostrifies and its all good. =D

Ne ways never stop writing! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Wow such a great job so sweet i like this