Good, this is exactly they way i feel with my boyfriend!!! Awsome job! Hey and thanx for checkin out my poem! Keep up the great work!!!

Marie

Your welcome im glad you liked it be cause those are my deepest words so far

I like it...

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Wow eve i like ur poems to... very nice
XxKaylaxX

Nicely done, hun.... but my suggestions to make it better would be to put in traditional or closer to traditional poem form. spice it up with some more descriptive words.. and youll have a smashing poem! i gave you a four... youve got potential!! keep up the hard work
amanda and baby
thanks for chekcing out my poem

Love it r we going to hangout this week

That's a beautiful poem.. you go girl. hey you mite wanna no im only 15 lol

Beautifully expressed, well penned piece. I enjoyed reading it.. 5/5