Not bad at all. Keep writing and releasing your feelings. Never give up and always keep trying. Other than that. wonderful poem.

I really liked your work keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Oh my goodness! This was so good. And i do feel like this alot. It`s true aswell, Everybody does hurt, Some less, Some more. But we all do! Keep up the good work! && Thanx for the comment! 5/5

luv natalie x0x

Good work!!! You express your self well. Keep writing and you will go far.
-Blacksand

Wow!! its Excellent! and lONG! lol

Aw i love this poem, along with a few others of yours! your very talented. goodjob!

5/5 i love it!