This is true inspiration to all African Americans everywhere (including myself). It's incredibly powerful and uplifting to anyone who reads this for in some ways the message applies to everyone. Incredible write!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

A wonderful poem which i thought deserved an EXCELLENT~
Im neither African-American now am I what they call black, instead Im your tipical white=P But this poem I think is wonderful, you keep going and show them all. For genocide is always wrong!

A wonderful poem which i thought deserved an EXCELLENT~
Im neither African-American now am I what they call black, instead Im your tipical white=P But this poem I think is wonderful, you keep going and show them all. For genocide is always wrong!

Beautiful. Such determination and powerful language lingered throughout this poem. You've explored almost every aspect concerning the rights of ALL beings; and evidently shared the joy among us all. I am proud of you for writing this, and I pray nothing may ever come in the way of your 'ideal happiness' =P. Sheer brilliance.

P.S: Thank you for your comment and I am greatful for your on-going appreciation for my poetry =].

Great use of words u rly use them powerfully in this poem and many others. also a great message i can tell u truely belive what you write! good job

Very deep write. I love your use of language. You related the struggles that the race had to go through and shared how that race tiumphed in the nd as they were not able to be broken down...even under all thet pressure.
I think what made this such an enjoyable read was the words used to rhyme..they were not he common worsds that are used by all to rhyme. Fabulous write I was very impressed.

Well written, your are very talented. This is a deep poem and it came from the heart. I am very glad I had read this poem. It is very good. 5/5 from me my friend.
~Evil Penguin~ (Mykel Megan Mapel)

Very strong poem.. beatutifully written.. SPECTACULAR JOB!! keep it up!

David this really good. You are very talented in expressing what you feel in verse.

They ask me how I feel? I answer by yelling my poetry not by whispering a Gun.
Because violence shadows the power u can do replaced by your thumb,

So true....You have penned a powerful message! Hope to read more from you.

Hey i love ur poems...there awsome

Exquisite write'in, Talkin bout the struggle in slavery. I realy enjoyed your poem, it was so upliftin to see what your eyez see and I hope everyone who reads your poem will open theres as well. 5/5[added to favorites list] Keep up the good job.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.