Loved it

It was nice! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

That is a good poem keep up the good work its very touching

Very well written..nice! 5/5
-k-

If you really loved me you would talk to me and tell me whats going on and i just want to let you know before i move on that i will always love you and think about you and ill never forget you

LOVE,RAVEN

It`s a cute poem and has a nice flow.

it is hard to live without you,
hard to breathe without you, to sleep without you

I loved those lines! Keep up the great work! 5/5

LOVE
Lolli.xx

Very nice poem!!!
Good luck

Aww, that was very good. I liked the emotion you put into it. Nice work!

-Jennifer.

Aww...that was so sweet..and I loved the way u rhymed it was cool. Keep up the good work!

Aww...that was so sweet..and I loved the way u rhymed it was cool. Keep up the good work!

Not bad I think that the flow is kind of all over the place, but other then that I think it is a very loving thoughtful poem!

This is absolutely amazing mate. Make more ! you've got fantastic talent ! 5/5

Good poem.
peace
anna soffe

Awwww baby you changed thanx!

i love you baby boy!

Loved it keep up the good work
~danielle~