Wow that wa really good.so realiztic and emotive.well done. i like this so much im going to regularly check your profile for new poetry.
keep up the great work
~sarah~

I liked it..its very revealing on how u felt.....

I'm sorry. but the poem that came out of this situation was really good if it makes you feel any better.

Wow this is great i really feel the same i kinda said the same thing about him being my rainbow girl we think a like but we have been threw the same thing i just want to get over him its like i cant move on!!!!!!!!!!!!!