Good poem... although the one stanza confused me, the whole poem you were saying how you wish he'd go but then in the next line you say how you wish you could make him stay, try saying rather something like: I really wanted you to stay,
But you must leave, you're better off that way!

Good write though

Great poem i love your expression through and your last line sayin believe it cause its true..excellent job
and it hurts me to say but me and my gf broke up yesterday after 9 months...you can read my profile about it....so now shes my X..
Great poem though 5/5
~The Broken Man~

I did the same with a boy. well actually, with every boy i ever been with! i like this poem =))

Umm, this poem was good, i liked it, not the best you've wrtten but still good.
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