I agree. I try not to use cliches and crap, but it's hard not to! Well keep looking and let me know whem you find it!!!!

I believe you have just written a poem that's pretty orginal.
And I agree 100%.

Great poem, very original and well written.

5/5

This is a great poem keep up the good work.

Nice work! Love how you put your thoughts together into a nice piece of work. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Please take a look and comment on my latest... "Feelings of a year"... think you might like it.... :o)

You asked to me to read your poems, but not this one, but while i was looking for the one you told me about, i saw this one and the title caught my eye, i read t and i love it, thisis the most oroginal love poem i've read, and it makes perfect sense to me because i always think the same thing but i keep writing anyway, well 5/5 really good job, i loved your poem

Yeah its so true but yours is very original well done makes a nice change :D
xxALLYxx

You are right. UMMMM. I wonder if my poems are origanlly. UMMMMM. well, oh well. keep up the good work. love lots

xoxoxox
~Jess~

Awesome, I agree 1000%! the cliches do get old, for sure... great poem! 5/5

Another excellent poem keep up the good work
5/5

Great poem. I hear your complaints and I agree!! Everything is just one cliche after another! Good work on this poem; clever