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by Bullet For My Valentine   Feb 16, 2006


I suffer every day and night,
I can stand it no longer, die I might.
Death's whisper chills my brittle spine,
tonight my soul is his to dine.

I collapse at the knees, my body so numb,
my breaths shorten and mind becomes dumb.
"Come with me my mortal friend,
now its time for your life to end."

I step into the light so binding,
Death's voice so deep and binding.
He rest his hand upon my weakened shoulder,
my thoughts fall silent and body colder.

My skin pales white and blood stops flowing,
my tongue ties up and sight starts going.
I saw the outline of his cloak,
but did not hear the words he spoke.

My body lay on the cold hard floor,
Death stepped inside and closed my door.
I felt my soul raise from my chest,
I dare not fight, its for the best

Dustyn Carey, Age 15

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    That is deep...I was just thinking of writing something like that but I didnt start it yet...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychel

    Omfg this is so deep and .... i cant even describe it..i love this! i can relate, in oh too many ways...
    5/5, keep it up,
    ~me, the one and only Raychel Renee~
    o yeah, and if u get a chance and u want to, leave a comment or two on some of my poetry...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    I Liked it I wish there was more than one of your poems to read. Keep me updated for the next.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nevaeh

    I like ur poem its really good

  • 18 years ago

    by loenly angel

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