Comments : Core of My Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Once again very beautiful.
    I love your peotry.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I just read this poem again and I LOVED it^^^my coment above didn't seem good enough. lol This was so well written, had a good flow, and your choice of words were great. I can really relate to this one and I loved the emotion you put into it. That was amazing, you have a lot of talent. Great job.
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Great job...loved the lines:

    -The misery you caused me shooting through every vein

    -The cries hidden behind walls

    -( and the title ) Core of my heart.
    5/5 for me...great job!
    ~Jules