Just brilliant...this is amazing poem.
loved every single word of it.

all the best and take care

Its a wonderfull poem, all the words goes along, and its great
keep up the good work

It flowed really well! And the way you put your feelings into words was amazing! Loved it! 5/5

Very impressive. The whole tone of this is sad and really speaks out to you. I particulary enjoyed some of the lines, such as
'Take the remenants of a wandering heart,
And build me the safety of his open arms'
just cause they fit well but also stand out on their own, which shows how much thought you have put into this. Awesome stuff :)

Let me feel again, the love that I seek. Gives the feeling that it has happened once, and you dream for it to happen again but never stop. Just that line seems to have enpower what the rest of the poem says.

Never stop writting, it'd be a crime to your skill, to yourself.

This Poem Is Amazing...I Love It

That's really very, very good!

I rlly loved this poem! its like a prayer almost...grrt wording as usual...ur an awesome writer!
love ya lots,
sore

I thought this poem was good, and I like your rhyming ones better than your non-rhyming ones, but I am biased lol ! The last four lines were pretty good!
Charisma*
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Stefhy.....cry... you have touched my heart!!!