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This is such a great heart felt poem i loved it great work :)
by Bill Turner
I love the flow and attitude in this. Confident, flippant and passionate. Great poem!
Loving and passionate...... with knowing it will last forever. Beautifully written.
Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)
by master of shadow
Brillliant poem, flows very well and has a uniqueness about it.
Darien I love this poem! hahaha it made me laugh at times and it wa sso perfect!!!!! I'm so glad you're back and so glad you had me join :) It's not half so interesting without you!!! Take care and keep writing those amazing poems!!!!
Wow, this is a superb poem! I loved the whole Idea, and using clebs names and what not was so unique.
The whole poem made me smile, its such a cute love story!
Well done, keep it up, you got a good muse :]x
by Simon Hayes
Hey ... don't slag off the notebook... LOL! This is perfect Darien... It makes up for your not writing for a while! I really enjoyed this, the flow is a triumph and the words are just beautiful :)
Ahh darien that was s0 beautiful such a sweet piece. very well written a heartfelt piece keep it up
l0ve always d0ra
by Gesselle Valle
:'') me cries happy tears... that poem was so amazing and touching. hey, did you ever finish that song you were writing... you gotta send me the rest! ^_^ hugs my friend and miss ya.
by jessica Cardenas
I really like this poem. It made me think alot about me.
by shobhana kumar
Very nicely written, great flow and real display of emotions!
good luck and keep writing!
A vaery nice different aspect, well done
Thats was great...and well written..im impressed...yours is one of the best ive seen yet! keep it up
by Sarah Ingmire
I love this poem...it's really good and makes alot of sense.
This is a great poem and if you geet a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be. Keep up the GOOD work!
by the love of another fills my soul
Thats cute. and it totally rocks nice job
Very unique and enjoyable. Isn't love grand?
This is so sweet!!! I really liked it... keep up the good work
Ohh my gosh. Did you write that for you girlfriend? That's wonderful, and well, she's seems very lucky to have someone like you. Wonderful job. Deff a 5/5 :)