This is such a great heart felt poem i loved it great work :)
xoxo robyn

I love the flow and attitude in this. Confident, flippant and passionate. Great poem!

Loving and passionate...... with knowing it will last forever. Beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)

Brillliant poem, flows very well and has a uniqueness about it.

5/5

Darien I love this poem! hahaha it made me laugh at times and it wa sso perfect!!!!! I'm so glad you're back and so glad you had me join :) It's not half so interesting without you!!! Take care and keep writing those amazing poems!!!!

Darien!
Wow, this is a superb poem! I loved the whole Idea, and using clebs names and what not was so unique.

The whole poem made me smile, its such a cute love story!

Well done, keep it up, you got a good muse :]x

Hey ... don't slag off the notebook... LOL! This is perfect Darien... It makes up for your not writing for a while! I really enjoyed this, the flow is a triumph and the words are just beautiful :)

Ahh darien that was s0 beautiful such a sweet piece. very well written a heartfelt piece keep it up

l0ve always d0ra

:'') me cries happy tears... that poem was so amazing and touching. hey, did you ever finish that song you were writing... you gotta send me the rest! ^_^ hugs my friend and miss ya.

I really like this poem. It made me think alot about me.

Jessica

Very nicely written, great flow and real display of emotions!

good luck and keep writing!
shobhana

A vaery nice different aspect, well done

Thats was great...and well written..im impressed...yours is one of the best ive seen yet! keep it up

I love this poem...it's really good and makes alot of sense.

This is a great poem and if you geet a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be. Keep up the GOOD work!

This is a great poem and if you geet a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be. Keep up the GOOD work!

Thats cute. and it totally rocks nice job

Very unique and enjoyable. Isn't love grand?

This is so sweet!!! I really liked it... keep up the good work

Ohh my gosh. Did you write that for you girlfriend? That's wonderful, and well, she's seems very lucky to have someone like you. Wonderful job. Deff a 5/5 :)

Love always,
Nickie♥