WoW! This poem spoke to me on so many levels. Beautifully written. Interpretation is always the readers folly and I love this poem.

WOW, beautiful write...... love it.

I already knew what an acrostic was =p
each line works really well
and i like the words that were spelt out
very unusual
that's what i love about your poems
each one is different
keep it up =]

Shows a truly stunning mastery of language, I love the way you manipulate syntax in order to maintain rhythm without compromising meaning. Really amazing 5/5

Outstanding! Your grasp of a subject and the way you relay it is pheunomenal (sp?).
I adore these lines:

"Artful in bloody design thirsting for holy wine
Rearing it's voice of twentieth century poetry"

You truly are an inspiration to me. Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry......Holly

I just realized it's an acrostic....lol. That puts it on an entirely different level, I'm so jealous :)

Wow, Melissa-this piece is amazing.Your use of language and deeper meaning is phenomenal.Have you tried writing/submitting to the literary small presses?You should.This is just amazing.

GaryJ